http://sam-newberry.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sam-newberry.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] francis_drake 2008-02-08 09:35 am (UTC)

Очень хорошо. Но финал (буквально последние пять строк) как-то чуть скомкан вроде... Не знаю, субъективное ощущение, ничем не подтверждённое. Но всё остальное - великолепно.
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